Hi Andrew,

The newest chapter is terrific. All the conversations and the focus
totally on the characters is just great.

But fyi - in case you weren't aware - Fanfiction.net seems to be having
its semi-regular problems with email alerts at present. I didn't get
mine about this update.

My last alert was 2 days ago, so it's only fairly recent. Hopefully it
won't last long.

Alison