I'm posting 2 of the earth scenes for 2.2. The first is Amy and McQueen's experience in the village of Marsdon prior to meeting Gary and the Makepeaces. The...
Wheels
MWSloban@...
Jul 5, 2000 9:40 pm
1462
I know it took me forever to get back to you about this. Sorry. Did you write this portion of the scene? It was very good. Also, I think you are absolutely...
Brenda Stevens
brendajoanne@...
Jul 5, 2000 9:43 pm
1463
the village alternate Gary/McQueen - the village Amy was driving through the rural countryside at an easy pace;obeying the speed limits; and generally...
Wheels
MWSloban@...
Jul 5, 2000 10:14 pm
1464
Gary/McQueen - the village Amy was driving through the rural countryside at an easy pace;obeying the speed limits; and generally enjoying the scenery. She...
Rayhne
rayhne@...
Jul 5, 2000 11:22 pm
1465
early morning - first day without the Makepeaces. McQueen woke before the rest of the household, dressed and went out. He was used to starting every day on...
Rayhne
rayhne@...
Jul 5, 2000 11:22 pm
1466
Feet of Clay - part 2 The energy left by the sibling confrontation slowly ebbed from the kitchen. Amy poured some tea for herself and sat. Margaret continued...
Rayhne
rayhne@...
Jul 5, 2000 11:23 pm
1467
... I made a few grammatical changes in the preceding sentence, but Just because I think it scans better. ... Let's look around, maybe ... I inserted an...
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 6, 2000 2:58 am
1468
... similar ... I've added "a" just before cardiovascular. ... I think this sentence needs a comma. ... I've corrected anti to ante. ... I've corrected...
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 6, 2000 2:58 am
1469
... I added "was" to the sentence. ... his ... I changed the beginning of the sentence to "She placed one before ... " ... I added a comma. ... I corrected the...
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 6, 2000 2:58 am
1470
Nice job, Sandra...Could you post the corrected versions in the File area or post them here? ... had worked ... workout ... their chins on ... impending ... ...
Rayhne
rayhne@...
Jul 6, 2000 12:57 pm
1471
THANK YOU Sandra. It amazes me what iImissed in my own work. Well done, and again many thanks. Stick in "border collie" clarification anywhere you'd like...
MWSloban@...
Jul 6, 2000 9:08 pm
1472
... I'd prefer to post corrected versions here, but I want to make sure I'm not treading on the authors toes for the few changes I suggested. Not the ...
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 7, 2000 7:49 am
1473
No problems whatsoever. Thanks, for watching my six. Wheels...
MWSloban@...
Jul 7, 2000 10:30 am
1474
At 07/05/2000 06:21 PM, you wrote: Gary/McQueen - the village Amy was driving through the rural countryside at an easy pace, obeying the speed limits and...
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 8, 2000 3:15 am
1475
early morning - first day without the Makepeaces. McQueen woke before the rest of the household, dressed and went out. He was used to starting every day on...
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 8, 2000 3:15 am
1476
Feet of Clay - part 2 The energy left by the sibling confrontation slowly ebbed from the kitchen. Amy poured some tea for herself and sat. Margaret continued...
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 8, 2000 7:47 am
1477
OOOPS. Sandra, I just noticed that in 2 of my scenes i had left the name of the farm blank. ( we hadn't solidified the name, Riverdale, til right aroundwhen...
MWSloban@...
Jul 8, 2000 8:01 am
1478
... side....
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 10, 2000 2:33 am
1479
... there ... Riverdale Farm day. ... Lyons ... prompted. ... Rocket ... and ... striking ... praise. ... with ... with ... put ... him. ... This...
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 10, 2000 2:34 am
1480
... Done. I've just re-posted Wheels Scene 2 and Wheels Scene 3 corrected again. Blank Farm has become Riverdale Farm. No problem ... that's why I have a...
Sandra Huibers
schuibers@...
Jul 10, 2000 2:38 am
1481
Anyone have any ideas about an actor to play the flight surgeon, Commander Patrick Sullivan? He is in his late 40's to early fifties, red hair, and in pretty...
Brenda Stevens
brendajoanne@...
Jul 10, 2000 10:40 pm
1482
Does anybody happen to know what network broadcast the assassination of Chartwell in the episode "Eyes"? I'm not sure whether or not it was identified, but if...
Brenda Stevens
brendajoanne@...
Jul 10, 2000 10:44 pm
1483
After pounding my head against the desk, I finally came up with the actor I was thinking of...how about Bo Hopkins? ... From: Brenda Stevens...
Rayhne
rayhne@...
Jul 11, 2000 1:04 am
1484
Urk!!! I don't remember...could someone check? If not, I finally found my S:AAB tapes (hopefully they're still working) and can prolly check myself. ... From:...
Rayhne
rayhne@...
Jul 11, 2000 2:12 am
1485
I'd appreciate it. Brenda ... http://click.egroups.com/1/6035/0/_/10196/_/963269070/ ... __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Get...
Brenda Stevens
brendajoanne@...
Jul 11, 2000 10:17 pm
1486
Rayhne-- Ouch! Was Bo Hopkins in "American Graffiti"? The name rings a bell, but a face escapes me. Brenda ... ...
Brenda Stevens
brendajoanne@...
Jul 11, 2000 10:34 pm
1487
Oh, my...I think he was but I'm not sure. He's a rather rangy-looking southern boy. Actually, I see him as a down-home Southern doctor meself. ... From: Brenda...
Rayhne
rayhne@...
Jul 11, 2000 11:38 pm
1488
Rayhne-- I'm trying to find a photo of him. No luck, yet. If it is the actor I'm thinking of, he would work. Brenda ... ...
Brenda Stevens
brendajoanne@...
Jul 12, 2000 9:14 pm
1489
Rayhne-- Finally tracked down a picture of Bo Hopkins. He was the person I remembered from "American Graffiti". I could definitely picture him as Patrick. ...
Brenda Stevens
brendajoanne@...
Jul 13, 2000 7:58 pm
1490
What can I say? Great minds think alike... ;) ... ===== "Bother," said Pooh, "Eeyore, ready two photon torpedoes and lock phasers on the Heffalump. Piglet,...
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