burmafrd wrote:

>Hope you all enjoy it. I am very new to writing.
>
>
For a new writer you have an excellent grasp of plot and the characters
were all in character. I thought it was a great start, but you need to
write more. There's a large gap between the end of the story and the
short future scene that you had at the beginning. I want to know what
happened in the intervening years. Would you like for me to beta read
it for you before you post it on the list?

Becky