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Just put a new story in files

Message #2071 of 2095 |

Hope you all enjoy it. I am very new to writing.

Mon Aug 14, 2006 12:16 am

"burmafrd" <burmafrd@...>

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Message #2071 of 2095 |

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Hope you all enjoy it. I am very new to writing....	burmafrd	Aug 14, 2006 12:16 am
... For a new writer you have an excellent grasp of plot and the characters were all in character. I thought it was a great start, but you need to write more....	Rebecca Ratliff rratliff2002	Aug 14, 2006 3:00 pm
Actually left the gap because I ran out of gas as regards the story. Its not much of a gap-maybe a year at best....	John Hallett burmafrd	Aug 14, 2006 3:11 pm