Hi all.. Well, after not writing anything for a while, this just came to me... I hope you all enjoy it! Take care Annie B. <:3 )~~ Title: Green Eggs and Gabs...
Okay, it took me a good 5 minutes to stop laughing my head off at this story! I'm going to be smiling all day because of this! :D Great job! So funny! -Xedra...
Kandgking1@...
Oct 3, 2003 1:55 pm
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Hi Annie, This was hysterical - Dr. Suess meets the cast of Xena! Poor Joxer getting the poop on his tongue though - ick. Great job on this story, and what a...
"Hey kids, listen up, if you want to be sick 'Cause your dinner looks like something from a Cronenberg flick Think twice before you cuss and shout 'damn damn...
Hey guys, For anyone who got a kick out of Annie's story, I *heartily* recommend Moxy Fruvous. They're a Canadian band with a sort of quirky fame across North...
... this story! ... *** I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the feedback! :) If you like the story... you'll LOVE the song! Moxy Fruvous' "Green Eggs and...
... getting the poop on his tongue though - ick. Great job on this story, and what a great way to start the morning off with a smile :-D ... *** Thanks,...
... *** YES!!! Oh, gods!! I LOVE that song! My kids all love it too... I've got it on the computer and everytime it comes on, we all sing it. LOL! Thank...
... recommend ... *** "Nothing makes a crowd disperse more quick than a great big puddle of SICK!" ROTFL!! I got the first line in there, but there was no...
Title: Parole Series No.13: Revenge is a Dish Best Served Hot Author: Susan Owens Thanks: to Sandy Fiebranz for the beta reading and for all her help, ...
What? No comments, people? Okay, then... The story was full of unexpected twists that kept me going. It was nice to see Joxer improved but not perfect....
"Phil_D._Hernández" <BroadwayPhil@...> wrote: What? No comments, people? Okay, then... The story was full of unexpected twists that kept me going. It...
I'm so sorry, I read this story a while ago but then didn't have time to reply and then I forgot. :-( Can I just say ditto? Great job Susan. I really...
Real life kept me away from the computer for a while, but I finally had a chance to sit down and work on this story again. Hope you enjoy! As always, Any and...
Kandgking1@...
Oct 14, 2003 4:12 am
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Wow Xedra A very intense part. I could almost feel the heat of Joxer's anger and hurt. This story is really great Susan ... Do you Yahoo!? The New Yahoo!...
Thank you, Susan! I have to say, this chapter has been the most challenging to write so far. For those of you wondering... YES, it does have a happy ending. :D...
Kandgking1@...
Oct 14, 2003 7:53 pm
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As Aphrodite once told Joxer in one of my stories, "Whoa! Major angst here!" And so it is. It fits very well, and of course Joxer has to fight the feeling....
Wow... thanks, Phil! You have *no* idea how much I was worrying about overdoing the angsty stuff. Well, I've read your work so maybe you do. LOL *wiping brow*...
Kandgking1@...
Oct 15, 2003 12:08 am
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Hi Xedra, Glad to see another part of this story come up :-) The Joxer angst was very well written and not over the top at all, as Phil said. What a violent ...
Thank you, Sandy! Actually, using the necklace was a last minute idea. I remembered that I had mentioned it before and the whole stable scene just came to me....
Kandgking1@...
Oct 17, 2003 12:48 am
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I am catching up with OLD, OLD STORIES! :D I'm getting through chapters of "On His Tod" but when I finish it, I'll post feedback then... meanwhile, though,...
Wow! This really was an intense chapter. I'm also really impressed that almost all of it took place without any spoken words, up until the end with Joxer....
... I am certain this is archived someplace else, Jer, 'cause I KNOW I've seen it. But not in ages. *LOL* You do have a flair for the silly... -Rebecca (who...
... I have a skill & a talent for being silly ... Cheers, Jer the silly p.s. Callie was definitely my first Xena Babe, which led to my first story, Dite's...
Thank you so much, Rebecca! I didn't keep dialogue out of it on *purpose*... in fact, I didn't even think about it until you mentioned it. <G> I'm glad to hear...
Kandgking1@...
Nov 6, 2003 11:07 pm
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... Well, you have success at both, so rest easy. ;) *snerk* "Hung like a horse" - I almost did a spittake at that one! :D Btw, can you tell I'm still working...
Hey Tristan, I hate that it took me so long to get to this but I like the story a great deal! All the stuff about Joxer making up moves as he went cracked me...
... Yay! I'm a success :0) I'm in the middle of a standalone story at the mo - about 2/3 done, hopefully finished by Xmas - so won't be doing anything else for...
Okay, having finally gotten through the lengthy chapter four and the shorter chapter five, I now present my thoughts! 1) Write more, please. 2) I like how a...