Hi, everyone!

I thought I would let you know that I've done a revision of Natalie's 40th
Birthday. I've added more details to some of the scenes. I also added to
the dark Nick scene and let Nat blast Nick a bit more, too. Let me know what
you think about her threat with garlic; this line was fun to write. As
usual, Nat was demanding. She always seems to get her way with me. <G> I
also added Dimitri's arousal to witnessing Nick and Nat during this scene.
I decided the man couldn't watch them and not be affected.

At the time of the original writing I didn't want to let Nick get too dark
with Nat, but after careful consideration, I was able to add more without
making him appear evil.

The reason I'm letting you know is because recently some of the emails from
you guys told me that you've reread the stories several times and some of
you have printed them out to save. I'm very honored that you're reading my
work more than once and feel it's worth saving for a future read.

If any of you read the revision, I would like to hear from you. Thanks for
your continued support. I'm off to work on Chapter Three of Second Chance.

Take care and have a safe holiday!

HAPPY 4TH OF JULY, my friends.

Fondly,
Deborah
http://homepage.mac.com/hymonb/ForeverKnight/