Maybe, I don't know. The thing is that if RD is right there, then it will be obvious that he's not who you're affraid of. I'm starting to wonder if a mystery...
... come up with something.I wasn't sure. I can go back and do another rewrite. That's no problem. She can go ahead and put yours.Sorry Goldi,I didn't mean to...
Ahhh!! :D 1. I really think we should keep the murder mystery in. It's an intriguing plotline. 2. This is my experience at writing stories...but maybe it...
OK, well how about this? I will go ahead and post what I had written as Part Two, as it is. It doesn't really fit in with what Pam wrote at all, but maybe we...
(This is what I had written.) When Inspector Goldloch arrived at the crime scene, he found resturant employees and patrons nervously talking in little groups....
... as being dead,is that me? Please don't kill me off,I'm having too much fun! lol.In RichardDawsonFanDomain@yahoogroups.com, "strawberryfox744" ... help ... ...
... in looks,but now twins.Couldn't the waitress be another character as well?In RichardDawsonFanDomain@yahoogroups.com, "strawberryfox744" ... help ... go. ...
Huh? Say that again? I know that RD did have an older brother who also worked at the resturant, but I don't think they looked alike. Wasn't he a fair amount...
1) Next of kin- in linking the two parts together last night, I made Pam the next of kin. Okay? 2) I'm going to write this so as the next person to write can...
... I thought he might be covering for some. I guess the one that came to mind was a brother.Not necessarily based on his real brother. But mainly the coverup...
... of the character. I'd have to agree with the name Colin. In RichardDawsonFanDomain@yahoogroups.com, "strawberryfox744" ... who ... alike. ... we ... be ......
Oh, I see! Then again, maybe it's to soon to decide who the real killer should be. We'll probably add lots of new characters over the next weeks. I'm sorry...
... or am at least in by 8 in the evening. Well just make sure which one's turn it is next time.These things happen :) Besides I know a little better which...
http://www.geocities.com/jgordongirl24/insert_title_here.htm Okay, the girl who comes in the restaurant at the end can be Talia if she wants it. I see her as...
TALIA, I'm glad you're here! We're in the process of making some choices about the story, and we really want your in-put, since this was your idea! Instead of...
Strawberry, you ARE a miricle worker! I never thought those two could be made into one! Just a couple of (unimportant) things I noticed: In my part, you took...
I just read the story so far.... It starting to look really good. In my opinion I think we should call richard Colin...just because that was his name at the...
Thank you. And thanks for being an editor- I need one. I deleted that line because it was in parentheses so I didn't think it was part of the story. I'll go...
Ok, so far we have three votes for Colin and one for Richard. Anyone else have an opinion? MY idea for the story (I would like to hear other people's), was to...
... myself.Maybe he could be the giggolo type since he seems to be more attracted to the older ladies and that's what makes her angry. (Might post twice.)In ...
Sounds interesting! Or perhaps they had even gone out once or twice, but it didn't last. (What does Pam look like?) Another thing we absolutely need to...
I'm big into organization when it comes to stories, so I'm going to make a list of what we know up to this point. Characters: Colin- the waiter (bet ya missed...
I wrote it with that in mind- I like it. ... and ... will), ... see ... Okay, I don't want to just take this a run, so speaking of realtionships, what do you...
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