Hello everyone,

My name is Marns AKA Bumpkin (bumpkin_is on LJ), and since I just
finished writing a story, I now need someone to look it over for me.
Makes sense yes? :)

Type of story: This is an AU M7 story that is a crossover/immersion
with Highlander. It's Gen and only about a PG rating, maybe PG-13 for
language to be safe.
Length of story: (Wordcount: 4,280)
All seven are involved, though one is mainly just talked *about*.

Now what I am looking for, is someone to go through this story and
poke at anything that doesn't make sense, mention if something reads
'off', and finally, to fix my grammar and punctuation - because
frankly my skills in that last area are bad enough to make a cat
laugh. (or more likely it's them just coughing up a hairball of
disgust *g*)

For any who are interested in looking this story over for me, you can
email me at 'bumpkin.is@...'.

Thanks ahead of time to anyone who reads this,
Marns
~pN