Hello All,

I'm currently writing a story where Ezra is six years old and has been
abused (physical, not sexual) by Maude and her 'boyfriends'.

Anyway, he ends up at Chris's ranch where he gets to meet the rest of
the gang. They try to help him with his problems and bring Maude to
justice.

Would anyone be able to cast their eye over what I have written so far -
pick up any errors, give thoughts on Ezra's possible behavior or offer
any other suggestions - that would be great.

Thanks,
Sarah (Hombre)