Before I submit the fourth instalment of 'Savage Duty' I really need
someone to re-read (or read for the first time) all of my current
stories - parts 1-3- plus the fourth to check for inconsistencies;
anything that readers may find confusing, any mistakes with names or
incidents within the story- bearing in mind that it isn't finished
yet(I can use the next 2 instalments to correct problems).
I'm not idle, its just better for a story to be re-read by someone new:))