hi, sue! if you don't ahve any takers, i'd be happy to oblige.
i think i owe you for taking a peek at my story LIES, LINES AND
FISHING...

so, if you still need help, send it along.
kcs;)




> The deadline for Magnificent Shorts #2 is July 1, 2007. I have two
short stories that I would like to submit. Is there any chance of
getting constructive criticism before the 'zine's deadline?
>
> One story is 5 pages long and focuses on Buck and his
background. The other is M7 LB OW (a sub-AU I don't know well) and
is only half a page. It's more of a joke than a story. (To be
perfectly honest, it's "borrowed" from an old, old Rick O'Shay
cartoon.)
>
> If your schedule permits you to beta-read in such a short time
frame, I'd be grateful for the critique.
>
> Susan M
>
> PS For those who are interested, Magnificent Shorts #2 is open
to original stories as well as those previously published on
the 'net. Stories may be OW, ATF, or any other AU, so long as they
are under 10 pages. See www.neonrainbowpress.com for more details.
>
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