I've not written fanfiction before and would like somebody to look over
my first story for me. The more "grammar Nazi" you can be, the better.
If you can help with characterization too, wonderful.

It's a One Shot piece that will be around eight pages or so in length,
if I'm estimating correctly. The universe is ATF and the main character
is Ezra, with a bit of Ezra/Inez thrown in. J.D and Chris also feature
quite heavily. It's hard to say what genre the story is because there's
a bit of everything, but I suppose angst and hurt/comfort are the most
dominant aspects.

- Cassie.